Peer review definitely gave us some key things to work on during the editing process of our news release. For example, we moved around some of the paragraphs so that all of the important features were mentioned throughout the article, however they were made more concise so that it didn’t sound repetitive. We also added more quotes to our news release and spread them out throughout the entirety of the text so enhance the interest and desire aspect without being too promotional. As for the actual layout of the document, we made our logo slightly larger to highlight our brand more. We were also able revise in order to keep all of the text on one page so that it is easily readable and understandable.
